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My Dear Grandfather

Description work, keyword research and category review for Barsha Rai's novel, commissioned by Cactus Rain Publishing.

Author
Barsha Rai
Client / publisher
Cactus Rain Publishing (Nadine Laman)
Marketplace
Amazon US
Editions reviewed
Kindle and paperback
Paperback
5.5 × 8.5 in · 302 pages
Scope
Description, keywords, categories
My Dear Grandfather book cover
Supplied cover. Cover design was not part of this project.

The book and the challenge

The novel is set in Nepal: Rick's relationship with his ailing grandfather sits inside a story of family conflict, a murder and a missing family member. The listing needed to introduce that story clearly before moving on to the author.

The original Kindle page mixed story information and author biography in one dense block, so a reader had to work to find the novel's premise.

Original Kindle listing description for My Dear Grandfather
The original Kindle listing: the starting point, not a matched before-and-after comparison.

Diagnosis and strategy

The priority was making the story and positioning easier to understand. The description work brought the central situation and family tension forward. Keyword research focused on the language readers of family mysteries actually use, and category research explored routes for a mystery with a strong family element.

Keyword research table for My Dear Grandfather
Part of the keyword research. These are recommendations, not verified saved KDP settings.

What was delivered

Three documents gave the publisher a clear, prioritised path.

  • A three-page listing audit of public-page observations
  • A five-page optimisation report with a description draft, keyword research and category options
  • An action plan with priorities, assets to keep and possible future work
  • Seven researched phrases, including family secrets thriller and missing person mystery book

Boundaries of the work

The research recommendations and the categories later visible on Amazon are separate records, so we don't claim every recommendation was applied. Later ranking figures were a snapshot of a different edition, not a before-and-after comparison, and no sales or ranking improvement is claimed.

Publisher

“Mr. Tella has proven his experience, skill, professionalism through several projects. He is Cactus Rain Publishing's preferred contractor.”

Nadine LamanOn behalf of Cactus Rain Publishing